When I first came to Computech I was afraid of not making new friends, and about this school not being social. But, when they made that speacial activity day in a Friday I agreed to myself that I was wrong. I was wrong, because that same day  I made new friends. I was also wrong because when we were in the gym they told us that there are many school dances,clubs,dances,etc.
    I also found new friends on the third day of school. Some of them are also in some of my classes. We met up at the quad, and we introdued ourself. We decided to hang out everyday and have luch together. I'm glad to be able to come to this school and meet new people.
11/26/2012 02:06:09 am

You did make some mistakes on both paragraphs, but this was a really good paragraph.


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